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Alien Suicide Runaway by ~HalcyonicRain:iconHalcyonicRain:





Alien Suicide Runaway

Late night plays calling me again
As the moon and i dance on my soul with this pen
The craters are my gifts in which i may have played to hard
But the moons not hurt she feels no disregard
So kindly bringing the light to me
As I fall on my knees and beg and plee
I swing and wrap my toes around her face
Soaking in its strengh
I feel the embrace
Thousand eyes look apon us tonight
Lets give them a good show with pure delight
And if you can catch me i'll give you a hand
Take down your scars andf bring you to land
You can show your monsters here
I fear nothing when you are near
This is our last time to show that we cared
This is our last time to show what was shared
And we'll leave  this place forever you know
Dance on the stars with our lil toes in a row
Pin piont and plot our destination
My lungs begin to bleed from the respiration
Farther and father away from Earth
We'll settle for a fine planet of mirth
Take our time and find away
If not tomrrow then today
Ponder the life, and what we had
This is so much better now we are glad


                                                                                HalcyonicRain 9/10/04'
©2004-2009 ~HalcyonicRain
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Author's Comments

Hmm, I just wrote this poem..its about The moon and i runing away, witch is suicide to the people on earth, henc the title.
Anways, I think this will happen one day....

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:iconconfusedsoul:
Very original, good job.
btw the title sounds like a band name...but uh maybe thats just me.
:iconhalcyonicrain:
AHA, yeah, it could be...thank you for the comment!

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Is this pavement crying out loud? -Cedric
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:iconskooldayzed:
0.o I kinda wanna write a guitar part to it

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"You can only be offended by what you allow to offend you.....nothing can touch you if you do not let it." -John Sullivan....ME!
:iconmajin-d:
Very nice piece even though it seems to be about some random topic...very well written :).

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:meditation::meditate::headbang::meditate::meditation:
:iconhalcyonicrain:
Hmm, yes, random indeed,well, i wrote it becouse i use to go outside and swing and talk to the moon and stuff like that...but yeah, thank you!

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Is this pavement crying out loud? -Cedric
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:iconhalcyonicrain:
oww oww, do it, i wanna hear!

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Is this pavement crying out loud? -Cedric
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:iconjimmylovesahat:
i enjoy
i enjoy aliens
i do not enjoy suicide
i am neutral on runningaway

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Eaugh.
:iconhalcyonicrain:
Oh really, interresting.

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Is this pavement crying out loud? -Cedric
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:iconzekkus:
Very ironic I just got out of the shower and now you have naked ppl in your pic. lol Nice peom, i kinda got over the suicide thing. :D

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I am the one who will become the Lord of the Sith. (One Piece fans will get the joke). If you don't know what One Piece is check my clubs listed on my journal. :D

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